We have learnt a lot from our peer's feedback of our pitch, firstly we have plenty of positives to be proud of. What our peers mainly picked upon was how we had a great use of examples in picture format to help them visualise what we see, and at the same time made sure we mentioned all aspects that were required for the pitch. We were also told we had a confident speech, we feel this is a great positive to have because it shows that we know what we are talking about, and have a solid plan in place; we will make sure to keep this confident vibe throughout the course of the project and on any other videos we have to talk in.
However we also received constructive criticism so that we can improve in the future, the most common negative being that we may have spoke too quickly at times, therefore we will take extra care to make sure this wont happen again in future videos. We also learnt that we should try to explain our ideas more, rather then just simply say what they are.