We had feedback from other people in our class of what went well with our rough cuts and even better if.
WWW
- Good use of low key lighting in the performance
- Good start of the narrative as you know what going on.
- Good framing in the performance
EBI
- Have more close-ups on the singer face
- have a variety of different shots and angles
- Lip synching need to be a lot better
- Needs more semiotics
So from this feedback we need to edit the lip synching better but we still need to do a little bit of filming so we have that variety of shots and angles which will help us get the higher grades.